Art’s looking a bit better but it still doesn’t resemble my style yet… And I don’t know, I hate Keith’s look on the first frame… >:c

HAHAHAHA “style”. Seriously folks, at this point, you don’t really have a style yet. Sure it’s a “style” but it’s uncontrolled and brought by inexperience. Hmm, well, here’s a bonus pic of what she’s doing outside.